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Re: Life,Death,and Love(working title)
I'll try spacing it out more. You arne't being harsh.Any advice you can give is great. I promise, the romance is coming soon.
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Captured
I like it,but like Hopeless.I'm confused. Does her boyfriend force her to have sex with him? Why is she so angry with him?Where is her anger coming from?
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: The End of Us
Thanks guys:]
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Fate --- Prologue
This is very well written.I wouldn't change a thing about it.Great job:]
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: A Simple Mistake: Chapter One
Nice work.I really like it.
Dec 14, 2008
